damik's Diaryland Diary

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They'll give an award to anyone

So I've decided not to be upset that I didn't win the poetry contest anymore. I just got the winner's book in the mail yesterday. I didn't read much of it, but what I did read blows. It has no flow, it has no rytham, it's not stiring. Nothing that even remotely makes it poetry.
It would be like
If I started to
Write my diary by
Deliberatly putting
Breaks in the
Sentances. She just
Writes about nothing
And calls it a poem.
What ever happend to
Meter? What ever
Happened to form? At
Least I know I did't
Win because the judge
Had no standards not
Because I suck.

7:31 a.m. - 08-01-02
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